Day 12 POEM: Forever

May 4, 2016

Forever, October 27th 2004


i thought you said forever,

you'd love me for forever,

but what happened to forever?

it's shorter than i thought


cuz when you said forever,

i thought you meant forever,

this is not forever,

it ended sooner then it ought


i was looking forward to forever,

i lifetime of forever,

but you cut off my forever,

i wish you had not





I have a feeling that I might have been going through a breakup of some sort during this time. That might have something to do with the type of poems that were written at this time. I chose this one because I like poems that are simple and yet powerful. Powerful in the way that the message and emotion is clear. Don't get me wrong, sometimes I like the cleverness of more complex poems that allow is different interpretations of their meaning. But today I was looking for something simpler. It's a busy day and I need all my wits with me. Just tell me how you feel! And I do. Take care!

P.S. May the 4th Be With You!

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